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Hi everyone! 
This is my first colored art! I gave her a random name  
I didnt really take the background too seriously and raffled it up a bit.

hope you like it and I would appreciate feedback

Program used: Photoshop
Tools used : Lasso tool, brush tool and pen tool
Artist Description
Hajima Hi everyone! This is my first colored art! I gave her a random name I didnt really take the background too seriously and raffled it up a bit. hope you like it and I would appreciate feedback Program used: Photoshop Tools used : Lasso tool, brush tool and pen tool
Comments
CericCalas 2010-03-28 04:21:49 Part 1 of feedback: the background is pretty neat, the irises look pretty good, and the rose/flower is nice. Part 2: The right ankle becames far too skinny, the left ankle is too thick, her legs are about 1.5 times the length of a normal character, her knee should be somewhere around the start of the boot, it looks like her back is overlapping her left arm, her butt needs smoothed out, her hips, based on the position of her torse, should extend to her right more instead of being flat, that would change the rest of the picture as well, her forearm is larger than her bicep, her right shoulder should be larger(to match her left), the top of her dress shouldn't be that level; because of her stance, her right arm should be up a little and the top turned slightly toward us, the chest and left arm are pretty good. Part 3: You should spend a little time smoothing out the shadow. Think about your light source and the folds you have in the clothing a bit more. Above the boot it looks pretty good. I like the hair. Keep up the good work.
FirstBorn 2010-03-28 11:31:47 CericCalas said it all. Remember that his comments are contructive comments. Keep up the good work and I hope we will see more of your work in the future.
Hajima 2010-03-28 15:29:25 thank you very much for you feedback :D it's certainly very contructive and exactly what i needed :) i will improve on those areas and make better art in the future, especially gonna improve on anatomy, shadowing and foldings for now. once again Thank you very Much!! :3
Hajima 2010-03-28 15:33:10 oh i forgot to mention this was done with a mouse just for the " Excuse " at 2 in the midnight... :P
Zeph 2010-04-09 19:16:10 i agree with cericcalas on his critiques. you did a terrific job though with this. can't wait to see more!
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