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I know its a bit rough but there are some parts about it that are bothering me like the neck... and i dont know how to fix it.
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DBlade I know its a bit rough but there are some parts about it that are bothering me like the neck... and i dont know how to fix it.
gatrosk 2008-12-11 18:52:45 The neck is fine, its just that the ears are too low. Instead of being level with the nose I would put them level with eyes judging my the proportions here.
R0B3R7 2008-12-11 23:19:29 just looking at the picture it looks like there's some anatomy issues with the face/head more than the neck. maybe the head is just too high up on the neck (or neck too long on the head depending on which you draw first). try using guidelines =] it really helps me at least. and try to get the placement of the features right before you do the detail because the placement makes a humungous difference =] keep practicing :D
DBlade 2008-12-12 14:02:22 ok thanks, i do use guidelines but maybe it was when i was finishing it off. I'll try to make these changes so thanks.
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