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Advice for comics please..
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Caffeine Advice for comics please..
gatrosk 2008-11-22 16:38:12 For the words in the upper left corner I would draw actual bubbles instead of what you have. Its more engaging in my opinion. :) Just a suggestion though.
Inevidence 2008-11-22 17:27:04 The picture where she gets thrown a can at her head, it's placement puzzles me; why do you have a frame in a frame? What I'm saying is, the nullspace created by the frame on the left side makes a place that would normally read like a frame. You could just leave the square frame out and it might look more natural :)
Caffeine 2008-11-22 19:09:08 Thank you both!
Yaz 2008-11-24 11:29:08 I love the way it looks honestly. I do agree about the second frame. If anything it would just cause me to lose my direction a little bit. The ear in the third frame is alittle displaced but other than that I likes iiiiit. But I do think anyone who isn't familar with comics would have trouble following the page. =D
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