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so I am planning to ink and color this soon... just wanted some quick crit on some things, mainly the guy's legs, (Is he too tall?)
I also posted this in the forums under work in progress, though that may be against the rules, lol
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Wandering_Musician so I am planning to ink and color this soon... just wanted some quick crit on some things, mainly the guy's legs, (Is he too tall?) I also posted this in the forums under work in progress, though that may be against the rules, lol
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R0B3R7 2008-08-13 22:47:15 not at all against the rules ^_^ ...from what i know O_O anyways, looks great! as for some crits, if you were to bend his right leg up, i think his right knee would be higher than his left, you know what i mean? i think his upper right leg is a tad too long. and maybe add a tad bit of skull to the back of his head :D can't wait to see it b^^
pencil no jutsu 2008-08-14 07:36:14 i think the neck of the guy is a litlle to long nice idea btw ^_^
CynikSama 2008-08-14 11:37:18 Maybe some work on his neck as said before and as for the legs, what rob said. I'm looking forward of the inked version ^^
Wandering_Musician 2008-08-14 16:17:33 Yeah I can see how his neck is a little too long. and yeah his right leg seems longer than the left, I will attempt to fix that. Thanks for the C&C everyone!
Def Character 2008-08-17 13:35:27 Nice sketching ^^
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