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just recently got a new ink pen set, and i wanted to try it out! My cousin suggested the tutu, so i worked from there.  i know i need work in some places, so critiques appreciated!!
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Alliesun just recently got a new ink pen set, and i wanted to try it out! My cousin suggested the tutu, so i worked from there. i know i need work in some places, so critiques appreciated!!
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R0B3R7 2008-07-10 21:18:37 hi allie! welcome aboard MWS. hmm...critiques...i think you might wanna bring down the hairline. the neck is a little long and the feet a little small too. also, the bi/tricep part of the arm is a little too long. ^_^ keep posting though. the more the merrier
pencil no jutsu 2008-07-11 03:08:00 yea practise is the key b^_^d
Def Character 2008-07-11 16:34:32 Maybe you could let the tutu ly around her so that it is also visible at the back (flat on the ground) ^_^
Zeph 2008-07-11 18:38:56 nice attention to details, however the foreshortening of the legs needs some help. the feet and ankle area are closer to us (the viewer) and therefore should be larger.
Alliesun 2008-08-01 19:48:38 thanks for the comments! yup, i haven't done many drawings at this angle, so i know i need practice. i'll be sure to keep working!
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