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PAGE 2!!! It's here. For those of you who don't know, I'm working on a manga! ^_^ Comments and crits please.

Btw, here's the URL for Page 1...

http://mangaworkshop.net/show.pl?imageid=26132
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gatrosk PAGE 2!!! It's here. For those of you who don't know, I'm working on a manga! ^_^ Comments and crits please. Btw, here's the URL for Page 1... http://mangaworkshop.net/show.pl?imageid=26132
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R0B3R7 2008-07-08 21:31:54 cool ^_^ your manga's coming along
Def Character 2008-07-09 09:05:46 I did some edit in tha forum ^^
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