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I made something with colour, please try not to faint from the shock :O
I'm not sure if I like this one or not seeing as there are many things that could be improved. The pose of the older guy looks really un-natural and his face just doesn't look right at all and his hands . . . just no DX
Ah well better luck next time but for now crits please. :D
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Lozz I made something with colour, please try not to faint from the shock :O I'm not sure if I like this one or not seeing as there are many things that could be improved. The pose of the older guy looks really un-natural and his face just doesn't look right at all and his hands . . . just no DX Ah well better luck next time but for now crits please. :D
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pencil no jutsu 2008-05-28 15:27:51 his left under arm looks a little to small and thin b^_^d
pencil no jutsu 2008-05-28 16:45:17 Crits eh... hmm. The plushie hangs only on his thumb 6^^ as for the face either replace the chin or rotate the facial elements (without the mouth)a tiny bit clockwise.
Lozz 2008-05-28 16:46:25 Oh, yeah you're right :o I think I made his upper arm slightly too long also 6^^
Def Character 2008-05-28 17:04:35 agrees with pencil ^^ I like the colouring and the details. Maybe the horns both backards or both on sideways . Cute bunny ^^
killerkun 2008-06-01 23:27:57 he looks like he's about to smash them together... which makes this pic awesome! Nah but really, awesome outline and neat color pallete :D
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