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last pic i did with the denzegar character, there were errors that def pointed out. i just drew the character over to see if i could get it right this time around... c&c me def!! :P
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yurusanzo last pic i did with the denzegar character, there were errors that def pointed out. i just drew the character over to see if i could get it right this time around... c&c me def!! :P
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pencil no jutsu 2008-02-05 09:58:09 i think thet the legs are to short but i like the hol figur b^^d
Def Character 2008-02-06 10:30:01 okays i gree with pencil on the short legs figure on the left 6^^ te one on the right: has he got double pectoral muscles or is the lower one the beginning of the ribcage? The hips are way better only the pose of the legs hmmm make it more manly by spreading the legs a bit. The plate-thinghie on his back is that straight or curved around his body?
yurusanzo 2008-02-06 11:49:26 good call on that def. i didnt notice the mistake on the second pic. i should of drawn the ribcage area in a downward motion wraping around the abdominals rather then back up into the pectorals. im not sure what i was thinking. now that you pointed it out it looks funny XD. the first pic i thought i drew the arms too long and below the knees too short. at the time i didnt have a eraser tho for the first one. well ill take the word of both you and junior on that pic and redo it. oh and the plate on the characters back is curved and should petrude out abit but in my opinion it looks a little to flat in that pic.
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