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I was practising with my grafite pencils to get some structures. But i liked the design so i colored it.I would like some honoudt crits on this. I know the fist is wrong already Xp
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pencil no jutsu I was practising with my grafite pencils to get some structures. But i liked the design so i colored it.I would like some honoudt crits on this. I know the fist is wrong already Xp
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SHIN 2007-12-21 18:35:50 I think you did a great job =) only crit I have is to consider the gravity point of the body, 'cause he stands a little unbalanced ^^
Kheine 2007-12-23 05:13:31 son of defmaster getting better!! i like what i see ^^ You should only rotate him so that he stands more balanced ^^
Kheine 2007-12-23 05:13:51 and dont be lazy drawing shoes!
pencil no jutsu 2007-12-23 05:33:08 ok XD
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