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I haven't drawn in a very long time, i know, i suck =p <br/><br/>
just a simple picture, had quite an issue with drawing the outfit fold for the girl on the right tho ^^; i dunno can't think of any way to fix the problem beside for taking a shortcut and drawing those shaded areas.<br/><br/>

if you can point out the mistake in the outfit, i will be surely grateful. especially if you draw the lining for me to see ^^;<br/><br/>

o yea, i was also trying out different hair style too. its my first time drawing the hair like the girl on the left. i know, i need more practice =(
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AnimeminA I haven't drawn in a very long time, i know, i suck =p

just a simple picture, had quite an issue with drawing the outfit fold for the girl on the right tho ^^; i dunno can't think of any way to fix the problem beside for taking a shortcut and drawing those shaded areas.

if you can point out the mistake in the outfit, i will be surely grateful. especially if you draw the lining for me to see ^^;

o yea, i was also trying out different hair style too. its my first time drawing the hair like the girl on the left. i know, i need more practice =(
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Def Character 2007-10-30 04:04:39 Her upperbody is a bit to small, her breast almost starts from under her neck 6^^
yurusanzo 2007-10-31 07:38:51 i think it looks good... you should ither make the head smaller or body bigger
Andalyn Van Hellsing 2007-10-31 07:52:46 I think the eyes of the right character are located a bit low in the head. Also, her neck is a bit large at the base of the head (the top neck part). Don't worry, I have problems with folds too. I like to avoid them ;). But it's very nice overall.
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