|Kaiverta||IF YOU'RE INTERESTED IN THE STORY, PLEASE LEAVE A COMMENT WITH AT LEAST A SMILEY FACE ON IT, SO I CAN TRACK HOW MANY PEOPLE ARE FOLLOWING IT. THANKS. :D :D :D
I personally like this page. I actually think it's my favourite of the whole lot. Yes. =3 Critiques and comments welcome, as always.
Page FIFTEEN of the story.
|Dustin C.||2007-10-21 18:18:39||my only critique is the perspectives, the benches dont match the lines of the floor/walls. otherwise, very good! ^_^|
|Def Character||2007-10-22 04:30:05||The perspective yeah...6^^ Notheless outstanding performance Kaiverta|