|Kaiverta||IF YOU'RE INTERESTED IN THE STORY, PLEASE LEAVE A COMMENT WITH AT LEAST A SMILEY FACE ON IT, SO I CAN TRACK HOW MANY PEOPLE ARE FOLLOWING IT. THANKS. :D :D :D
Please comment. Feedback is most definitely welcome and suggestions will be taken into consideration. =D
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|Def Character||2007-10-16 07:51:15||Better make one dark grey frame with 2 black silhouets in the middle to give it some life. The text can you swirl around from up to down.... 6^^|
|VIIStar||2007-10-16 15:27:49||... i agree with def char... never leave an entire page black... it needs perspective, silhouettes, white-line, diagonal panels, direction… anything... just not a complete page of black... I’m not one to go back and fix pages that I think I messed up but, i’d suggest you redo this one…|
|Kaiverta||2007-10-16 18:19:35||Okay, thank you. I figured I'd put silouettes in the last panel, the one that's greyer than the rest, but I just didn't. So I'll go do that. ^_^ Thanks again.|