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Kaiverta IF YOU'RE INTERESTED IN THE STORY, PLEASE LEAVE A COMMENT WITH AT LEAST A SMILEY FACE ON IT, SO I CAN TRACK HOW MANY PEOPLE ARE FOLLOWING IT. THANKS. :D :D :D

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Please comment. Feedback is most definitely welcome and suggestions will be taken into consideration. =D

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Def Character 2007-10-16 07:46:00 ^_^ It might be an better idea the let the ogre appears with speedlines behind the redeyed figure. On the second frame more ogre with only speeldlines for the movement in and out of the arm. frame 4 the pulled back arm near the chest area with the pin maybe a few diection lines to guide us towards the needle. The last frame can be a little more dramatic with a freeze frame in mid air while falling towards us and a stunned look. As for the layout frame 1 and frame 5 (
Kaiverta 2007-10-16 18:18:38 o.o... Ummm.. I think I understand what you're saying. XD; BUt yes. Thank youuu~ I'll take all the advice and suggestions I can get~!
Def Character 2007-10-17 10:45:30 Woah not everything got on 6^^ Frame 1 and 5(a bit bigger) in the outer corners frames 3/4 under left but nearby the 2 big frames
Kaiverta 2007-10-17 17:47:39 Def, what on earth are you on about? ^^;
Andalyn Van Hellsing 2007-10-21 14:55:50 Oh my god! It looks so professional! I like the red eyes!
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