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plz more feedback

ehm.. okay this are trunks and gohan lolz. but don't look at the face it's a little differend.. and that's ok. 

I should draw for someone him and his boyfriend in DBZ style like Trunks and Gohan XD 

sooo.. plz give me more tips and feedback to make it a lot better^_^
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Nagashiwa plz more feedback ehm.. okay this are trunks and gohan lolz. but don't look at the face it's a little differend.. and that's ok. I should draw for someone him and his boyfriend in DBZ style like Trunks and Gohan XD sooo.. plz give me more tips and feedback to make it a lot better^_^
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Def Character 2007-05-22 02:53:56 The torso of gohan looks a tiny bit to long 6^^
AAA-LAZEX-disign 2007-05-22 04:40:38 Nice Fan art
Wicked_Lady 2007-05-22 09:17:09 Whee, Trunksy ^_^ I like it, but you already knew that :P lol
Jean jaque 0_o 2007-05-22 14:41:58 Jezus wat lelijk XD trunksh & gohanfw... wat lief! //@(_ [: [__(, \\@(
Nagashiwa 2007-05-22 19:28:04 @Jean jaque 0_o: ja ik weet dat je me niet moet XD doe maar zo! @Def: /yeah I know.. I gonna redraw it
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