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poyanz i need the most brutal comments !!!!!!!!!
Avaeccus 2007-03-10 11:02:10 nice motion and great pose
AnimeminA 2007-03-10 13:54:01 beautiful, reminds me of juuni kokki. was trying to learn to draw those kinds of artworks.
Def Character 2007-03-11 06:13:38 The posing is very good... for the hands make a reference pic using a model As for the 2 strings of hair alongside the face... let them point in the opposite direction of the falling/jumping direction unless she is floating about ^^
poyanz 2007-03-13 07:32:23 dats wat i was thimking mr moderator floating in the air some kind of.... ^_^
AIKUZA 2007-03-13 17:07:01 the way you've fastened the arms doesnt look good. It's too rough and sketchy. And it's too big to get a overall good look of the art, which make it harder to judge, but I like most of it, not much flaws in it. cool pose ;)
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a just testing my self to see if i could get my eyes to cuter :3 i thought a bunny would be suitable lol please let me wat u think ps its coloured differently because i wasnt on my computer =^-^=
i like this one.. angel^^
I am writing a manga he is the main character oh it
i personally think this sketch came out better.
I think she's really cute :P I started drawing a lot of girls lately because one turned out really good in my opinion(previous post) well... critisism appreciated
i really love soi of fushigi yuugi...not only because og her costume that i want to try on...mostly..i love her character though she is one of the enemy or the antagonist in the story.... i was interested with her because of nakago being her she is really beautiful like me...hehehe
This one is really old, but it still has some elements I like. It was an illustration for a friend of his character. He wanted it to look like she lived in a very small house that wasn't built for a person of her height, but I think I may have overdone it a bit.
strange enough the art work to this story is actully, well every form of genra there is.
i made a sketch of a nurse when i was board ^_^
pencil no jutsu
this is just a "sloppy copy" drawing i did in school when i was supposed to be taking history notes.. i don't know whether it could classified as an anime/manga drawing.. i haven't really gotten the eyes down yet..

Aerrow from Storm Hawks and 'Preax' Teqra makin kissies while Cyclonia burns heart shaped smoke clouds in the distant background.

Awwwrrr... <3

FFVII copyright Square Enix

Sephiroth or Cloud?
Either way, Zack is best XD
Just some random swordy guy.This is the finished lineart.
I've been working on this one for days. every day 10 minutes. Time is really an issue here. If there a flaws
 in this piccie please say it so i can make it right. thnk u ^-^.

EDIT* Fix his arm and sword etc.