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this is a girl from the story me and my friends made up a few years ago. sometimes i still draw them.
well this is Alex she has the power of animals and she can handle a sword too.
i like how i've done the right hand and i like the sword.
i know there's something wrong with the legs but i can't find out what.

you can tell me whats wrong and whats good on this drawing.

i would like that ^^
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bevland this is a girl from the story me and my friends made up a few years ago. sometimes i still draw them. well this is Alex she has the power of animals and she can handle a sword too. i like how i've done the right hand and i like the sword. i know there's something wrong with the legs but i can't find out what. you can tell me whats wrong and whats good on this drawing. i would like that ^^
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Def Character 2007-01-12 17:04:14 Whats wrong with the legs? Maybe it's an idea to position the tip of the shoe on her right foot (our left) at the same hight as her left. She needs a litle colour on her hand (holding the sword) Thumbs up for clothing design ^_^ Keep it up!
WOLF 2007-01-13 05:41:02 her head is cute and the hands and feet are a bit too small i guess =3 but its very very cute ^_^
Shinfate 2007-01-13 10:43:24 all has been said ^_^ very good, keep practising
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