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Elf on a swing. The weird brown thing is the actual border, but I couldn't crop the drawing that way. I think the proportions and the posture are fine, but the whole thing still looks totally childish. I can't do decent backgrounds to save my life.
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gothqueen Elf on a swing. The weird brown thing is the actual border, but I couldn't crop the drawing that way. I think the proportions and the posture are fine, but the whole thing still looks totally childish. I can't do decent backgrounds to save my life.
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Shinfate 2007-01-03 16:34:13 don't worry gothqueen ^^ practice makes perfect right ^_^just keep drawing not matter what. I like the idea of an elf on a swing ( love elves )
Def Character 2007-01-03 17:11:37 one tiny thingy... her left arm seems a bit small. The shoulders should follow the angle of the hips making her left arm apear above her right from our point a view. Overall... she looks very cute and the colours are chosen very well ^^
Zeph 2007-01-03 23:42:35 I like that the outline is not 1 color. Nice
Kimiko 2007-01-04 05:28:12 You color much better than me ^0^
ukkie 2007-01-04 17:53:54 I don't think it's that childish, I think it fits the picture actually ^_^ I think the hair and the face look really pretty, her toenails are kinda scary though ^_^' ;-)
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