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project: ƒƒ{ƒbƒgƒmƒNƒY(Roboto no Kuzu)* This will be the cover for the story.  I finally finished it, but a few more touch-ups are needed~

i was wondering if anyone wanted to take a look at it, and give me a little feedback?  i don't want to bother anyone, or freak anyone out.  It has a very macabre, H.R. Giger-esque quality about it, and due to the nature of the material, I don't want to put it up here, not to mention that I don't even want to look at the stupid thing anymore(><)

Let me know how you feel~ or if you want to take a look at the whole thing^^

thanks again for everyone's support and talent^^ it's you all that gives me inspiration to keep working~
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breathingishibashi project: ƒƒ{ƒbƒgƒmƒNƒY(Roboto no Kuzu)* This will be the cover for the story. I finally finished it, but a few more touch-ups are needed~ i was wondering if anyone wanted to take a look at it, and give me a little feedback? i don't want to bother anyone, or freak anyone out. It has a very macabre, H.R. Giger-esque quality about it, and due to the nature of the material, I don't want to put it up here, not to mention that I don't even want to look at the stupid thing anymore(><) Let me know how you feel~ or if you want to take a look at the whole thing^^ thanks again for everyone's support and talent^^ it's you all that gives me inspiration to keep working~
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lotsofblood 2006-11-06 14:24:41 thats simply great
Kheine 2006-11-07 01:31:22 i dont really understand whats in this picture... is it a robot who's holding the girl? But otherwise i think it looks pretty damn good :)
Wicked_Lady 2006-11-07 09:41:12 This looks great! The shading, perspective, colors.. I love it <3
AAA-LAZEX-disign 2006-11-07 14:10:01 keep it up, looks good ;)
Def Character 2006-11-07 16:33:49 At first I didn't recognize the left hand of the victim. Is she somehow opening the chest of the victim...? hmm I'd like to see the whole pic as well
CericCalas 2006-11-09 11:11:24 I don't know what's going on in this picture... I see the hand and face the rest is sorta a blur. i don't know how, but i suggest defining more definitely the two beings(I'm assuming there's two?). As I've been hearing a lot from my graphics teacher lately: You have to think about the consumer when creating a piece of artwork. If it isn't clear what is in the picture, it'll lose their attention.
breathingishibashi 2006-11-10 00:32:07 thank you so much for your honest comments~ i wholeheartedly agree with your advice and critiques. I've learned a lot from you all *I personally didn't have passion for this project, and I just wanted to wash my hands of it...as much as it hurts me to say that I didn't have my heart in a work, it was something that bothered me as I produced it and simply didn't want to have anything to do with it anymore. *and I couldn't agree with you more, CericCalas, its ambiguity leaves it poor and uninteresting. I will pay more attention to that next time. I thank you all again, and I certainly hope that I didn't waste anyone's time...I hate making loveless art...or bad art for that matter.
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