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I drew that manga page again, how does it look? tell me if you think I should change anything else before I draw the final version :]
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Lozz I drew that manga page again, how does it look? tell me if you think I should change anything else before I draw the final version :]
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Def Character 2006-08-27 17:24:10 . . . b^_^d
Zeph 2006-08-27 18:59:19 nicely done. thought i dont get why he's angry in the 2nd picture and creepy/happy in the 3rd picture. which is he supposed to be?
r7ll 2006-08-28 05:26:43 I think the drawing's amazing.. You've captured character and expression wonderfully ^^
AAA-LAZEX-disign 2006-08-28 07:31:17 hehe nice one
Neonisis 2006-09-04 14:30:57 It makes perfect sense.. Great work
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