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It didnt became as good as i thought it would be... i really do not like the girls colors and somehow she doesnt fit in for the BG...
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Kheine It didnt became as good as i thought it would be... i really do not like the girls colors and somehow she doesnt fit in for the BG...
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Kheine 2006-06-20 10:32:19 oh.. btw the picture is made for the Sony PSP :D
Zeph 2006-06-20 10:58:06 i think she doesn't fit in the background because she's very clear and crisp and the background is in such a different style. it's a great picture though
r7ll 2006-06-20 12:57:39 The picture looks very surreal. Lovely colouring. I agree with Zephio aswell, both the fact taht she's coloured in a completely different style as well as not being angled correctly to be able to "stand" on the ground you've drawn. The individual parts of this picture are excellent though, and in my opinion her colours look great ^^
Kimiko 2006-06-21 02:22:48 She's awesome, and the background is beautiful ^0^ ^-^
Kheine 2006-06-21 03:05:53 ah yes... thats it... she cant possibly stand there... but oh well, i wanted to have a cool perspevtive
SPN 2006-06-21 04:25:46 OH WOW~!!! *_* ZOMG SO AWESOME~!! XD
TheDarkHell 2006-06-21 06:42:14 hmmmm ... you kinda wen lazy/sloppy on the bg :( ... dont really like it ... and the girl is really out of place in this pic ... i think you should try again :D
r7ll 2006-06-21 12:39:02 I wouldn't say he went sloppy on the background, it's got a lovely looseness about it that gives is a really soft warm feel. Most people are so used to seeing crisp, tight colouring that it's easy to look at a loose painting and put it down to laziness. In my opinion neither the background nor the girl is at fault, it's just the two don't go together. I agree with having another go though, the girl is relaly good, it'd be nice to see a background more suitable and that does her justice ^^
Kheine 2006-06-22 03:50:04 if i have the power to do another shot, i guess i'll do it ^^
FatalError 2006-07-05 05:47:50 ooh, perpsectives! Needs more fintuning in my opinion. But you really made an effort here, a tip is to give things in the distance a more brigther colorsetting, usually the color of the sky but then a bit brighter. nice job!
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