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guys I need feedback for my new character. it's her face, I need to know wich one is better, because my problem is that the a lot of the time they are skewed and I really have to get better >.< hope you guys see the difference. DefCharacter, I need you in particular here >.o ( if I got my feedback I will post my full art, thanks guys m(_ _)m
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Shinfate guys I need feedback for my new character. it's her face, I need to know wich one is better, because my problem is that the a lot of the time they are skewed and I really have to get better >.< hope you guys see the difference. DefCharacter, I need you in particular here >.o ( if I got my feedback I will post my full art, thanks guys m(_ _)m
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Def Character 2006-02-13 15:18:52 Replace the shin, the nose and the mouth. That should do the trick... Check your mail to get a visual ^^
Zeph 2006-02-14 13:33:34 i agree. im not seeing a difference... really nice though
Shinfate 2006-02-14 14:12:35 it's in the face area, check the cheek XD as I thought only DefC could comment one, owh well, thnaks aniway guys
r7ll 2006-02-15 11:48:23 I prefer the one on the left ^^ very nice character
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