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~~~ updated #4 !!! ~~~ ok, this is part of Christmas present for my bf. I hate this season -_- no wanders why it doesnt have much of christmas ... anyway. It turned out awefully ^^U i am not sure if i will give it to him. Please comment. There is something wrong in this picture, i couldnt find out what it is D=. emmmm help?. Oh yes, i added him wings =3 ^^UUUUUUU, fixed the breast, the lamps and i dont remember what else 0.o
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NikA ~~~ updated #4 !!! ~~~ ok, this is part of Christmas present for my bf. I hate this season -_- no wanders why it doesnt have much of christmas ... anyway. It turned out awefully ^^U i am not sure if i will give it to him. Please comment. There is something wrong in this picture, i couldnt find out what it is D=. emmmm help?. Oh yes, i added him wings =3 ^^UUUUUUU, fixed the breast, the lamps and i dont remember what else 0.o
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CericCalas 2005-12-21 12:04:09 I like it, and i don't know how you do it... but just a few things i noticed that might be what you're talking about are it looks like her neck is missing, and also seems like her boobs should be higher, because of the hilights on the higher part. and his shirt i don't think has enough shadows, it makes him look sorta flat and his neck has a bulge, it doesn't well look liek the muscle. after you see this, please delete it, i was just trying to help you improve it, and i don't want this massive comment, i'll recomment after
NikA 2005-12-21 12:35:50 i wont delete it >=P. Thanks for those tips ^.^ i was changing his neck since it looked very horizontal for his pose, anyway. There! a little of improvement. About the breast, they look ok to me, but i will play around with the shadows a little more ^-^. Her missing neck -_- that is something i cant change without messing up the picture.
Remi 2005-12-21 14:52:43 Not give it to him? Man, I'd kill for something like this and you're thinking about not giving it? It looks great, he should be grateful getting it. Well anyway, merry christmas to you, even if you hate the season. :p
mama_logon 2005-12-21 15:57:18 yes, do whatever you want. the color is beautiful. I like it.
CericCalas 2005-12-21 16:08:31 fine then, i'll repost anyway...the neck definately looks better, maybe you could add more shadow under the nose or something to make it look tilted forward more, and add some shadow to the hair, everything else darkened alot more in the shadowed, area, her hair's about the same. The man in that picture is a very lucky man, being fed for christmas would be a great present. definately give it to him! if not, i'll print it out and burn it in symbolism
CericCalas 2005-12-21 16:17:59 the part after the neck was about her lack of neck ^^;
AIKUZA 2005-12-21 17:18:51 very nice. he'll choke eating like tat. mxmazzy to yu2
1-MM-1 2005-12-22 01:58:02 the biggest cause of pain i my gril friend feeding me , kick ass pick love the color
Kheine 2005-12-22 03:31:24 X-mas to ya! Lovely colors!
NikA 2005-12-22 08:15:03 thanks everyone. I have been changing and fixing things as comments popped up. >_< Thanks everyone, it has already improved a lot! ^-^ <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3. XD "spaghetti, how romantic NikA" (my friend dixit). Please keep pointing out mistakes and crappy things! =3
Def Character 2005-12-22 23:22:31 Happy holidays Nika ^^
ngluvjj 2011-03-25 11:07:26 teach me how to do coloring TT.TT
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