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The first group pic I tried. Please tell me what I can improve before I color it!! (they're not naked...I just didn't draw the clothes yet XD)
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ukkie The first group pic I tried. Please tell me what I can improve before I color it!! (they're not naked...I just didn't draw the clothes yet XD)
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Zeph 2005-12-11 13:29:53 I know you'll fix this when you put clothing on them, but the guy with the folded arms on the right, his waist and sides of his chest is too straight. Nice one though
gothqueen 2005-12-13 13:26:50 I really like the girl in the front, very well done. The guy on the left (from our POV) has a beautiful face, but his hands need some more work they are way too flat, it's like he has robot arms. The girl on the right is really cute, but what is she standing on? Or is she flying? Because if she's leaning on the guy's shoulder she can't be that far behind him. And finally the girl in the back, her mouth should be a bit lower. I'm curious to see the finished version.
ukkie 2005-12-14 11:26:08 the girl on the right is jumping ^_^ thanks for your comments
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