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=3 hi everyone =3. i am making this under request at gaia. There is something VERY WRONG i dont know what it is so any comments and criticism are welcome =/ i guess is her left arm but i dont know why it is so odd >_<. She is supouse to be inside a hollow tree with huge leaves and bleh bleh bleh fog it has a sort of middle east style etc etc etc ...
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NikA =3 hi everyone =3. i am making this under request at gaia. There is something VERY WRONG i dont know what it is so any comments and criticism are welcome =/ i guess is her left arm but i dont know why it is so odd >_<. She is supouse to be inside a hollow tree with huge leaves and bleh bleh bleh fog it has a sort of middle east style etc etc etc ...
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Killer-Kun 2005-12-02 14:42:04 I guess if her arm looks is because it is in some kind of unnatural position, make it come out of the tree in horizontal position, that must do the trick :7
Zeph 2005-12-02 14:55:19 okay. the problem i found was the legs. If she has her legs CROSSED, then her leg would be up higher, and you'd see an almost triangle figure on her other leg (try crossing your own legs and you'll understand). If she isn't crossing her legs, then the part of the dress at the knees bending, it too thin. Very nice dress. It looks amazing, and i only found it because i was LOOKINg for it (you said something was wrong)
Def Character 2005-12-02 15:23:22 different size feet? Maybe you could imagine the elbow of the left arm a bit lower... and the curves of the snakebracelet a bit rounder to accent the roundness of the underarm^^ Great design though..
AIKUZA 2005-12-03 09:58:13 Cool lineart. It took me a while to figure out that the snake isnt actually a penis or something like that XD. Too bad about the undetailed tree, but I know you are a strong artist so I dont mind. Keep up!
ukkie 2005-12-03 12:28:27 the left arm seems a little short and small...that might be it. Otherwise a great pic! ^_^
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