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The girl called LaFaye Christine preparing an attack, comments are welcome, please be harder :3
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Killer-Kun The girl called LaFaye Christine preparing an attack, comments are welcome, please be harder :3
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TheDarkHell 2005-10-22 01:01:42 its a bid sketchy -_- pose is hard to do but you did a good job. uhhh a little shot on details in the clothes. then there is notreally a bg. and the and the has a rather large head i've you look at the size of her shoulders ^^. ow and maby add some lightning tho her hands ore something like that. well keep it up ^^
NikA 2005-10-22 07:36:16 nice nice nice, it has more details than your previous work ^-^ like on the hair and the white fabric under her skirt, that kind of coloring, contrast and details should be everywhere. Her face looks really good, but her eyes dont match each other (the left one falls and the other doesnt), i think her mouth and nose is placed a bit low (may be it is just me). Her left lower arm (which happens to be in the left part of the screen ^^) is a little long, if they cross just in the middle of her body they should be more symetric in proportions. About the lights on her hands, niiiiiiiice, i got good result by erasing part of the outline when there is too much light on one spot. ^-^ i hope i wasnt too hard on your pic since i really like your stuff and you keep getting better and better with every new drawing!! ^-^ *hugs*
Zeph 2005-10-22 19:43:11 im confused with what she is doing because it is not a well known pose. The head i agree is a bit big and the neck of the shirt is alittle wierd.
Killer-Kun 2005-10-24 15:54:16 Thanks to all of you, i'm making a lot of practice now that i see the failures :3
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my first upload
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ngluvjj
I dunno. 8D Just some BS sketch while trying to think of the most cliche possible death for dearest turkeyboy. Because he -needs- to die. :D Dunno why, but my style hiccuped in this picture, and it looks slightly like the style in old '80s anime. ... but anyway, don't bother critiquing it; it's just a 20-minute sketch.
Joou
YO!!! I finally got the chance to upload a new pic! i had a the lineart done for about a month before i could put it on the computer for coloring. Anyway, if you dont know who this is, it's Riddick from "Chronicles of Riddick".  A nice purple and black motif which somehow seems to fit. anyway, the caption for this pic is "Get that damn light out of my eyes."
Dustin C.
Hi, a sketch I made just now. I just met someone yesterday and he gave me inspiration to draw, not like, ehh, I like him or something. But I just liked his appearance, so I tried to draw something like him. It didn't really succeed, his hair was different, and I actually wanted his hair to be perfect. But too bad.
Anywayz, I do think it came out pretty good. I'm really switching styles the whole time, trying to find mine, especially with men, because I don't draw them that often. But okay, I hope you like it aswell.
Octobergirl
I am just obsesed with "LOVELESS"... ^^ please comment... :3
Misato
Aj havv nofing to sejj
Skakis
Production work of Reno from FirePath. If anyoen is curious FirePath is still in the works I hope to have the first issue done by next year.
Yaz
Hi! Happy holidays people! Here's another B&W Jobby from me ^^ It's some fanart for Avatar: The last Airbender. Close-ups can be found here:
http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/45265574/
r7ll
I love cats and I just HAD to upload this one!! So kawaii!! ^_^
ukkie
Weird one-eyed monster/human.
lotsofblood
So, I decided the other version of this wasn't finished after all lol.  Been a while since I've revisited the smudging technique; I've missed it  : )
chibi_emily
I made this picture out of boredom, I had alot of things I should have drawn instead but I just felt like making something that's got nothing to do with anything.... so I came up with this! The process of this picture was I made stuff up along the way, it starded with me drawing just another Nude, then I decided to draw the animal behind her.. then I thought 'He! she should be an amazon so then the tattoo's came and the dark skin and the 'african back-ground'.

I really like the way it came out... I hope you do too!!!
sacha
well here is a real "iff you think a little fire could stop me, youre rong ill still try to take your head" girl :P well injoy
TheDarkHell
comment pls! she looks funky!
Silence