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This was done in ballpoints during one of the many boring days on my job....where I can draw. Jay! I hope you can give some C&C on this since I wish to improve a lot. I know the shoulders are way too large...I always draw them like this >_<
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LifeMachine This was done in ballpoints during one of the many boring days on my job....where I can draw. Jay! I hope you can give some C&C on this since I wish to improve a lot. I know the shoulders are way too large...I always draw them like this >_<
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konflikti 2005-09-15 04:07:04 Awesome. You're right about the shoulders though.
Def Character 2005-09-15 04:27:44 It looks great nontheless...
Ayla 2005-09-15 04:32:05 I don't think so much that the shoulders are too large, but more too pointy. Otherwise, I don't see many things wrong with this, if anything else. She's gorgeous and you have an awesome style.
TheDarkHell 2005-09-15 04:43:31 really nice i also like doing sketching durning classes whit ball point (like im doing rigbht now XD)
NikA 2005-09-15 05:48:23 you have an amazing job .... i want one like that too ^-^. The picture is great, the shadows, the anatomy, the face, everything. You did a graet job. At first i thought that her shoulder was a bit pointy (nothing wrong with that, i like it that way) but since it is part of your style, folds and hip are also pointy ... i just love it ^-^. Great use of modulated line!. If you add it a background it would be just too perfect. I dont see anything wrong in this picture, may be the next step to improve is backgrounds
AIKUZA 2005-09-15 06:43:53 Cool style. I like it. Only crit would be is to make it bigger, cause these kinda arts are better in bigger size. For some reason I find the face a little bit male-like, no offense, just the shape of the face reminds me of it.
Killer-Kun 2005-09-15 10:43:48 Amazing, i like the style and that softness on the lines :3
Shinfate 2005-09-15 11:29:29 yeah, what they said :D really cool
ukkie 2005-09-16 08:05:28 you made this with ballpoint? Wow *_* I admire you *_* Such a pretty pic ^_^
Zeph 2005-09-16 20:06:01 i like how its a mix between realism and manga. i love the hair and cloth especially
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