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This is Amira. A new chara of mine. But there's still someting wrong with this picture but i can't realy figure out what. Can you guys help me out?
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angel_girl This is Amira. A new chara of mine. But there's still someting wrong with this picture but i can't realy figure out what. Can you guys help me out?
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Perfect_Sollitude 2005-06-06 07:35:08 Her breasts are a bit too low,the mouth looks funny, and some other little things that're not quite right. But just keep practising, you'll do just fine^^ (reduce the size as well, I'm getting all dizzy over here >.<)
Def Character 2005-06-06 11:47:39 Hi Angel_girl the mouth can stay that way if you just make some minor adjustments...check your mail..^_^
AAA-LAZEX-disign 2005-09-27 04:30:28 jea check jour mail... huh?? (Oo)
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