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Somewhere-between-sketch-and-lineart of an upcoming project of mine. Was wondering if the proportions are right, what ya think of it, what could be improved, etc. etc. So C&C it is!
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Marius Somewhere-between-sketch-and-lineart of an upcoming project of mine. Was wondering if the proportions are right, what ya think of it, what could be improved, etc. etc. So C&C it is!
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gothqueen 2005-04-26 19:22:48 Cool, very original. I think the head should be a bit smaller and the legs longer, but no real flaws
Def Character 2005-04-26 21:05:40 Great details...
Tom 2005-04-26 21:53:13 hmmm.. the head is a bit too big and her waist is also a bit too thin. It's like you added the head later on, after finishing the body, i can't really explain. Nice details, thats correct!
Marius 2005-04-26 22:01:03 Waist is indeed too thin (but keep in mind she's mainly scrapmetal :P), and I see the point made about the legs. Head is also a bit big, I could try to fix that, hope I won't screw it up. As for it being stuck on lateron, maybe it looks that way cuz of the design? ^^; Thanks, I'll try to obide... (but first... some hard earned sleep ^^)
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