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Im giving critiques for quite a while now and you never had the chance to c&c mine cause i never uploaded art. So i deceided to draw something myself. It started as a sketch (doh) but after thickening some lines it became all lineart-ish. Well i want to have some c&c before im going to color this. Please dont mind the hands since you wont see them in the color version, the orb is going to be pretty bright. Time for revenge, c&c !!
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Kaizu Im giving critiques for quite a while now and you never had the chance to c&c mine cause i never uploaded art. So i deceided to draw something myself. It started as a sketch (doh) but after thickening some lines it became all lineart-ish. Well i want to have some c&c before im going to color this. Please dont mind the hands since you wont see them in the color version, the orb is going to be pretty bright. Time for revenge, c&c !!
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Kaizu 2005-03-14 11:46:30 Yep the feets are a bit off, i'll work on that in the color version, thnx
Kaizu 2005-03-14 12:33:01 Yea ill make an action pose next time, oh, and it's a girl ^^
Kheine 2005-03-14 13:15:58 Real nice lineart! Really cool face and design... awesome kaizu! ^^
AIKUZA 2005-03-14 14:30:19 Cool weapon ^^ and very clean work. Just mind the anatomy a bit :P, but that isn;t soo bad. It's still nice work!
TheDarkHell 2005-03-14 23:59:03 it looks nice ron only it could use a more dinamic pose because now its a bit how you call it ummmm lol can't find the right word for it :P (de pose is iets te staties veel te strak moet meer beweging in man)but the rest is nice ^^
Kaizu 2005-03-15 00:38:02 Haha yea i know, thanks for the comment tDH, ill try something more 'active' next time.
Deetris 2005-03-15 09:59:56 Jep... The feet are the only thing off. The rest is cool
Kaizu 2005-04-29 01:02:32 Thanks for the comments everyone ^^
Kaizu 2005-04-29 01:09:01 Ok i changed some things, ive also drawn the legs and feet over again, i think they look better now. I know there are some missing lines near her hands but that is because there will be a bright light when i will color this one.. don't know when i will color it though.. so busy at college >.< i should make more time for drawing, instead of saying i don't have the time.
D.N.Z. 2008-01-23 07:03:54 NICE!! :P very pretty :P
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