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So I did this lineart of a character for some dude called Daniel, and I just want some crits on it. Body anatomy and muscles are NOT my strong points so I just want to know what you guys think of it, help me improve!
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Marius So I did this lineart of a character for some dude called Daniel, and I just want some crits on it. Body anatomy and muscles are NOT my strong points so I just want to know what you guys think of it, help me improve!
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Tom 2004-12-29 16:48:44 looks nice, the lineart :) is that character from the guy who didnt answer me? heh whatever. well, where to begin :P one leg is longer than the other one, or is that his stance?. The forehead should be bigger, and both his shoulders should be bigger too, and stick out a bit. His left bicep ( POV right ) should be bit smaller. and his fingers look like sausages :P work on it a bit more, it should work out :) i think youre better at girls
Marius 2004-12-30 00:22:21 Osau: yeah, due to lack of reference materials I used my own feet and I HAVE BIG TOES! Lol. I'll try to make them smaller.
Arturus: THEY DO NOT LOOK LIKE SAUSAGES!!! His hands are just big =( Well, you're right about the legs though, it's his stance. About the shoulders (and biceps), yes. I'll fix that. Wha... he didn't answer you? *rolls on the floor laughing* Sorry, it's late and at this time I'm REALLY giggly.... :)
Rin: FINALLY an artist who understands the many MANY hours that went into this drawing trying to make some crappy lines look like muscles! The foot probably looks odd 'cuz of the perspective. It's likely to stay that way.
Thanks for the critiques all! (No, not kidding, I mean it :P)
Tom 2004-12-30 20:30:02 Hey, I forgot: I think you made the sixpack look like its lying upon his chest/belly. He also has too big male boobies without nipples :P But thats my opinion. And where is his bellybutton? and where are the fingernails, and toenails? Vampires/werewolf thingies should have things like that, right? And what kind of perspective is this? please explain, cuz i dont get the stance of the legs.... and what does daniel think of this? lots of succes with it! hope he likes it!
Tom 2004-12-31 08:45:30 hey, another thing: i dont enjoy this, in your words; "bashing" your work, this is just my opinion. its up o you what you do with it. Dont take it personally! Just want to give you some pointers to improve your art for yourself and daniel.
Marius 2004-12-31 13:28:13 Peepz, don't pay any attention to Arcturus. I know him personally and may have said some things he didn't like, shortly after that he posted his second comment on this pic. I made every point he mentioned very clear to him. There are no detailes 'cuz I didn't yet had a liner thin enough. Now I do, and now you know.
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