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sailor jupitor!

HB pencil

so i had to draw hands fro my har teacher.... so i did sailor jupitor! her eyes are really close together... but whatever, thats the biggest flaw and its not THAT bad.
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zakuro sailor jupitor! HB pencil so i had to draw hands fro my har teacher.... so i did sailor jupitor! her eyes are really close together... but whatever, thats the biggest flaw and its not THAT bad.
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AIKUZA 2004-11-25 20:03:44 It's a nice concept, but I had a hard time figuring what was what you know. Not that hard but you know what I mean ;). Now I do see it, it looks kinda odd. Her forehead looks really big and the eyes you mentioned are indeed close to echtother. Also the outlines of her hands are very vague compared to the rest of sharp lining. Is the art cut off in two, or is this really the whole pic?
zakuro 2004-11-26 04:22:25 hahaha, well you see, my art teacher has this thing with borders... and if it dont have a border then we can lose 1/2 marks on our sketch... so i in absolutly everyway possible thry to have creative boarders. yea, the pic confuses me sometimes too, but i still like it, and im sooo proud of it cause there wasn't a pic of it, i had to find animated pics and create a realistic picture out of it! thanx for your feedback, it means alot!
Deetris 2004-11-26 22:32:01 whitout your comment, I din't see nothing in this dawing, now I do... Mabe make it a little more reckinizable (I will never pass a spelling examn I know... :P)with a pare of eyes or so? You're right. I'ts not that bad ^^
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