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Just some line art that i'm going to color soon. Give me some advice if something looks wrong so i can fix it in time. Comment !! *just some random chars of mine ^^*
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CynikSama Just some line art that i'm going to color soon. Give me some advice if something looks wrong so i can fix it in time. Comment !! *just some random chars of mine ^^*
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Dustin C. 2004-10-03 00:24:27 well besides the anatomy comments, the placement of the 3 bottom character looks great, but the top two look too far off, try putting them toward the center with the others.
CynikSama 2004-10-03 09:48:08 thnks for al the tips.. i'll work on it. and as you maybe noticed that making hands are not my specialty *blushes*
Nightwind 2004-10-03 20:25:44 cool (omfg) lol I love this pic
Def Character 2004-10-04 09:59:50 They're right try to find some balance in yer picture?
AIKUZA 2004-10-05 00:44:41 Nice, but I think the collage has too many open spots, too make it feel like a complete lineart. most things are already said. But I think the guy with sword surrounded by the two chicks is the best collage effect here. The other two need to pose better and closer :). Keep up!
CynikSama 2004-10-17 20:48:14 Thnks for all your tips
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It's done and ugly xD kufufufu... 

Chara pro:

Name: Clytia Mist
Age: 14
Eye: Pink
Hair: Dark Chocolate
B-day: May 9

Likes: Fashion, Chocolate, BL, Yaoi, Anime, Manga, J-pop, her brother, Krius, conventions, fashion shows, hotels, Cute things
DisLikes: Bitter things, her brother, Voi, Heavy Metal, Yuri, one track minds, being stuck at other peoples houses, popularity

About her: Clytia is one of those 'tough' kinds of girls, she stands up for anything and everything she believes in. She has developed a brother complex for her younger brother, Krius. She never lets anyone get close to him. She designs and creates her own clothes and also for Krius. But only for the two of them.

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Name: Krius Mist
Age: 10
Eye: Black
Hair: Milk Chocolate
B-day: Febuary 7

Likes: Chocolates, Cool things, Manga, Anime, Violin, Animals, Books
DisLikes: Spicy things, Cruelty, Noise, Popularity, Parties, Being away from Clytia, 

About him: Krius, thanks to the over attachment of Clytia, has a strange attachment to Clytia. He always tags along with her. He is also Clytia's dress up doll since he is oblivious to what 'yaoi/bl', 'yuri', 'gay' mean. So if you'd dress him up in a bright girly outfit, he wouldn't really mind or care.
L-tan
tis me, back from the dead...
yurusanzo
Hello MWS, it's been a while, hasn't it? 
Anyway, this drawing probably isn't a big deal, but I love it anyway.
(There should be a self portrait category, since that's what this is.)
Caffeine
Shiroi, faceshot, he sort of reminds me to krad from DN Angel © ¬¬' from mamoru tenshi ©
umi
Aries in middle age. She is already going in the Attune Academy(Warriors School)
AnimeTaughtMe
finnally we got a more 'interesting' thing to draw at art school ; clothing design for medieval cartoonies...I SCORED SECOND PLACE!!!! woohoo! (not that it's good but...nah)
bloodyspasm
Sora You sexy biatch!
Nagashiwa
sketch, in my style... im currently painting this with acrylics
Zeph
Cool mecha, my own design :)
Bates
in a field underneath butterflies do you dream of a beautiful change?
tanukinao
Just started using digital tablets, would be nice to get some feedback and comments on how to improve. :D thanks
SEKKAIYASUO
Xd..
do you remeber?
i'v draw that 2 years ago XD

:p.. Yaichi_san has pimped this one haha..
and I really like it.
Nagashiwa
the picture i drew on the back of a birthday for a close friend of mine. I liked the way it looked with alittle bit of abstract-coloring. Comments?
Zeph
Hey, Just dropping some cool sketches. This is for a schoolproject. They're character designs for a game we're making. Didnt know what to upload, but someone will enjoy this artwork XD. I cant explain the game, cause the gameplay is too complicated but fun to be understood in this page. Let yall know when its done. This is the final version I think, and its about to be modeled. Time for some sleep -__-
AIKUZA