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Just some line art that i'm going to color soon. Give me some advice if something looks wrong so i can fix it in time. Comment !! *just some random chars of mine ^^*
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CynikSama Just some line art that i'm going to color soon. Give me some advice if something looks wrong so i can fix it in time. Comment !! *just some random chars of mine ^^*
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Dustin C. 2004-10-03 00:24:27 well besides the anatomy comments, the placement of the 3 bottom character looks great, but the top two look too far off, try putting them toward the center with the others.
CynikSama 2004-10-03 09:48:08 thnks for al the tips.. i'll work on it. and as you maybe noticed that making hands are not my specialty *blushes*
Nightwind 2004-10-03 20:25:44 cool (omfg) lol I love this pic
Def Character 2004-10-04 09:59:50 They're right try to find some balance in yer picture?
AIKUZA 2004-10-05 00:44:41 Nice, but I think the collage has too many open spots, too make it feel like a complete lineart. most things are already said. But I think the guy with sword surrounded by the two chicks is the best collage effect here. The other two need to pose better and closer :). Keep up!
CynikSama 2004-10-17 20:48:14 Thnks for all your tips
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