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there is a story behind this pic, (too long to type). what i like of it: ahhh open canvas, the solution to all my background problems :D, yes i like the background, i like the colors too. what i dont like, i cant do horizontal nor vertical lines ??
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NikA there is a story behind this pic, (too long to type). what i like of it: ahhh open canvas, the solution to all my background problems :D, yes i like the background, i like the colors too. what i dont like, i cant do horizontal nor vertical lines ??" , the floor wasnt supouse to look like that ??", oh i few things i have to say: 1- if you see this pic too bright is because my monitor is NOT sets very bright (i dont wanna to go blind before turning 21) 2- that thing she is holding is a hamburguer 3- this was a quick sketch and quick colorwork. C&C welcome =3
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AIKUZA 2004-08-23 00:03:35 I don't mind the background being crooked. I like the way it is sketched. And sketchy things always have small flaws, but doesn't matter cause it's the style of sketch art :). The only things that disturbed me was her pantie shot. She doesn't have much of a p**sy :). And her hand hanging down is weird shaped compared to the other one which look a lot better. And her heapshape lines aren't there. Now her face looks pumped up :). Also the hamburgershape is a bit strange. I don't see any bitemarks in it. But I like it somehow. I like it a lot. These kinda pics inspire me you know. It's the scenary, pose, background and coloruse what gave the good atmosphere. I think, if you made it again, it would be flawless and better. :D
Dustin C. 2004-08-23 01:26:16 i like the coloring you did, especially the lighting. and her face looks cute when she's all grumpy. :p but her left arm is kind thin. oh and PANTY SHOT!! :D
ukkie 2004-08-24 20:28:48 for a quick sketch, it looks very good! ^_^
Remi 2004-08-25 19:04:43 I'll take a swing at the story behind this one.. Some man found this girl somewhere on the streets, she was lying there unconscious with bruises on her legs (like you can see in the pic.) wearing only her underwear. He woke her but she had no recollection of what had happened to her. Neither did she knew her name or where she was from. He went with her to an army dump (store) which was situated close-by where he bought her the jacket and the military boots, so she could walk the streets without being stared at. He also gave her his lunch (don't think it is a hamburger, more like bread or something). He was about to take her to the police when all of a sudden he got shot by some men who were after the girl. She ran as fast as she could and stayed out of their hands, but now she found herself all alone on the streets, and begins to eat the bread the man had given to her, being mad and confused about what had happened to her.
AIKUZA 2004-08-25 21:01:46 that's 1 creative story Remi :).
NikA 2004-08-29 16:15:15 remi, thats a sad story =( but cool. actually the real story (the true life story) is: i have a friend who lives in downtown when i go to visite him i have to take the bus. In the bus-stop near his house there always was this girl, she is young ... very young she may be 16 years old, she is a girl from the street, a prostitute (i never said it was a pretty story) it breaks my heart to see her there during cold winters night, now the whole simbolic makes more sense: she is sitting in a very disgusting place in the dark like avoing eye contact, frezeeing her ass during a cold night, showing her panty is a way for me to say that people only she her like a pussy something they dont like to see in there neighborhood and not like a fucked up life of a young girl, at the same time her sex area is beteween bruises and one last thing (the harder to explain) she is eating a hamburger ... a mcdonald's/burguer king's/wendy's shapeless hamburger ... god!! can we see it? we care about having internationals junk food stores in every fucking block but we dont care about the safety of this girl and i include myself in to this "we" because im as blind as the rest .... (told you, the harder one to explain) ... but remi, your story is much more interesting ^-^
Remi 2004-09-02 13:51:15 Well, thanks for typing the real story behind this girl NikA. You've just showed that reality can be incredibly harsh at times.
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