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The image speaks itself. It?s Achilles? death. As you heard by Greek mythology, Achilles who is demigod can be killed only if his heel be injured. At the Trojan War Paris killed Achilles.  Comment please?
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Misato The image speaks itself. It?s Achilles? death. As you heard by Greek mythology, Achilles who is demigod can be killed only if his heel be injured. At the Trojan War Paris killed Achilles. Comment please?
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AIKUZA 2004-08-16 15:09:08 The concept of the art is good. But his pose looks too stiff. His knees aren't touching the ground. Or is he floating in the air? His hand and feet look small. his muscleshapes look weird. the way he holds the spear is strange too. Like his thumb is on his wrong side. He could use some shadow beneath him, so it'll create more depth. The blood on his body looks more like vains. And the blood on the ground doesn't really look like it came out of his heel. You don't see anymore bloodstains around his feet. Just at a certain place on the ground. The 'Romanwarrior' outfit is done well. Hope you understand my comments and crits, cause I'm trying to help. :D
Misato 2004-08-18 20:37:58 You are right about the mistakes.... I know the hands and feet are small...thanx for your comments!! keep on...
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