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PLEASE COMMENT! Naruto fanart! I used 2 pictures to get their clothes and hair and all right, but I designed the poses myself (that's why they look a little crappy ^_~)Please help me with what I can improve on this drawing!!
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ukkie PLEASE COMMENT! Naruto fanart! I used 2 pictures to get their clothes and hair and all right, but I designed the poses myself (that's why they look a little crappy ^_~)Please help me with what I can improve on this drawing!!
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gothqueen 2004-07-11 18:36:02 Cool I think it's very good and you've managed to show their caracters in the way the appear in the pic. Great job
AIKUZA 2004-07-11 23:52:54 Like it that you designed the poses yourself and still keep the original character looks. Naruto could be higher. Looks like he's falling out of the picture^^
WOLF 2004-07-15 19:44:46 SASUKE-KUUUUUUUUUN!!!!!!!!!!! ??? DROOOOOL:D:D
phant00m 2004-08-07 16:13:34 very impressive :D Looks funny ^^
auto-mail_mechanic 2005-04-03 19:50:24 Sasuke's arm's should be a bit longer, like, make them a bit more alinded with his body. Other than that, I can't spot any mistakes. =3 I absolutly love the way you did Naruto! (Captured his...erm...moronic-ness! ^ ^) I like the way you did Sakura, also. Looks exactly like her. (I'd put an inner Sakura cursing Naruto out. XD) You also got Sasuke's "I'm to cool" aura down perfectly. YAY YOU. ^ ^
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