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HELP! i made this pic. and i know there is something wrong, only i don't know what... and i cant see it... please help me ....
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Solin HELP! i made this pic. and i know there is something wrong, only i don't know what... and i cant see it... please help me ....
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KurriKlown 2004-06-20 15:22:53 Her right upper arm is too short and therefore her elbow too high. Her left upper arm has a better length. I see she has the BAN kanji on her back, cool.
Mactire 2004-06-20 20:16:21 The girl is off-balance, as if she's falling. The centre of the body has to be in the middle above the feet. (The centre is located in the body, behind the navel you could say). Here, the centre is just a bit behind her (for viewer) left foot. I know it's a bit tricky, but practice makes perfect. Try finding the balance by drawing (a lot) different stick-figures. So, these we're my two cents^_^ Keep up the good work because your art looks good!
Solin 2004-06-20 23:11:58 thank you all! ^_^
Solin 2004-10-17 11:48:46 wel i don't know there are some thing not good so....i don't think i whil color it.... meybe later..
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