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Well, I uploaded the lineart of this one a couple of days ago, since it's an assignment for school I had to keep working on it ^^ It took me about 10 hours to color/shade it, and I'm sort of happy with the result. Not completely though, there are a lot of mistakes and it's not just the lighting or the proportions! I really don't like the eyes of the girl, anyone have some suggestions on how to do that better? I really want to know what I should have done better, so C&C it!!!<P>Thanks!
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Marius Well, I uploaded the lineart of this one a couple of days ago, since it's an assignment for school I had to keep working on it ^^ It took me about 10 hours to color/shade it, and I'm sort of happy with the result. Not completely though, there are a lot of mistakes and it's not just the lighting or the proportions! I really don't like the eyes of the girl, anyone have some suggestions on how to do that better? I really want to know what I should have done better, so C&C it!!!

Thanks!

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Marius 2004-04-04 23:10:17 Damn... due to resizing you can't really see the eyes of the girl.... I only saw that after uploading :/
CericCalas 2004-04-05 05:22:44 Only thing I can think of from this image is to make less darkness under the eyes, and add more to the top, or just remove it from the bottom... Had you not mentioned that, I wouldn't have really noticed.
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