my new manga idea: White-tone

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my new manga idea: White-tone

Post by Kentaku_sama » Wed Jun 09, 2010 1:21 am

It's been a LONG time since I posted here because of different reasons and my art has been suffering because I haven't been drawing much lately but I have a AWESOME new Idea for a sort of cult-mystery-drama manga. I quit the raikiitsu idea because I had no where to go with it but I will probably do it again or at least use the rebound character after this one is over. My manga idea is a sort of death-note(darkish) type manga with a bit of a different feel. Here's my idea:
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[I don't care if my japanese names sound stupid.]

The story of white-tone revolves around Sotsugi Doukami, a 17 year-old musician who wants to compose music for a living. Sotsugi-san finds out from a man named Hachiro Utsunaku that he is something knows as a muser, someone who is able to control things with music. (Like the man with the wind instrument calming the snake) Hachiro explains of how a muser can use his ability to not only calm people but also scare and kill people. A muser can for example play a few chords on a piano and start to make a room full of people do drowsy they wouldn't even realize someone was stealing their money and ect... Many musers will kill people with their ability and such.

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VERY rough storyline so far, but a decent start I'd say.
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Post by Aether » Wed Jun 09, 2010 9:41 am

Your Japanese names sound stupid.

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Post by Ceta » Wed Jun 09, 2010 11:10 am

Aether wrote:Your Japanese names sound stupid.

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Post by gatrosk » Thu Jun 10, 2010 12:14 am

Aether wrote:Your Japanese names sound stupid.
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Post by Kentaku_sama » Thu Jun 10, 2010 5:25 am

Your Japanese names sound stupid.
Why?
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Post by Caffeine » Thu Jun 10, 2010 7:26 am

Because you don't know japanese, do you?

Also this sounds like Midvalley The Horn Freak in Trigun, if musers are common why does anyone go out to live music anymore?
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Post by Ceta » Thu Jun 10, 2010 11:56 am

@Ken-chama: Caffeine is correct. The fact you don't know Japanese shows horribly. Stop trying to use Japan/Japanese in your story and things will work out much, much better for you.
Caffeine wrote:if musers are common why does anyone go out to live music anymore?
Agreed. If I knew that people were able to control me via music, I would avoid music altogether and just walk around with ear plugs in my ears. As for concerts/live musical events? You won't catch me anywhere near them.

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Post by Kentaku_sama » Sat Jun 12, 2010 12:02 am

Musers are very rare ya know? And I don't get why it shows I know no japanese... may'be not names though..
理由が分からないんだけど、たぶん僕は日本語の名前が漫画に使用しない方がいいね。
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Post by Aether » Sat Jun 12, 2010 3:27 am

Vomiting text book characters doesn't show me anything, to be honest. I would listen to Ceta.

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Post by Ceta » Sat Jun 12, 2010 2:30 pm

Kentaku_sama wrote:理由が分からないんだけど、たぶん僕は日本語の名前が漫画に使用しない方がいいね。
その考え、止めた方がいい。格好悪いよ。

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Post by gatrosk » Sun Jun 13, 2010 12:39 am

Oh God, not this again. ^_^
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