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Post by Saintarsenic » Sat Jan 21, 2006 6:55 am

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this picture don't seem to get comments in my art site for some strange reason... I need some critique, I'm already aware of the foot problem so no mention on that is needed. :x

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Post by Def Character » Sat Jan 21, 2006 7:15 am

I think that there is not much critiques needed, not mentioning the obvious :wink:

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Post by The Raging Spaniard » Sat Jan 21, 2006 4:10 pm

Its not bad! Those hands could have used some better reference and you definitely need to add some collar bone detyail in there, because if not the neck area looks like a big mess.

Color wise its all a bit muddy, too many colors of the same tone make the eye not know what the hell im supposed to look at first.

But yeah, good effort, nothing too much to it and like its been said, that foot is cataclysmic ;)
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Post by Az » Sat Jan 21, 2006 4:12 pm

You need to work a little on the hands, and the feet are a bit too thin.
Other than that (and the foot, hehe:P) I don't see anything wrong with it. Nice coloring! Keep it up
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Post by Caroibara » Mon Jan 23, 2006 7:25 pm

Great pic :D
I like the way you've coloured it very much, it's different what I'm used to.
And like they've already said before. Some more practise with the legs and arms and it will all look great.

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Post by EVA-02 » Mon Jun 05, 2006 9:45 pm

really nice but why is his fly open? :shock:

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Post by cericcalas » Wed Jun 07, 2006 3:35 am

it looks like the dude;s lower body is sorta detatched under the clothing, if you added a bit more butt on the left side, it'd prolly look better

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Post by SPN » Wed Jun 21, 2006 11:57 am

Its not that bad O_o Infact I reckon its pretty good ^_^ Proportion vertically-wise is well done but side ways some areas should receive more/less ^^;;; But overall I luff it XD

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