New fairy and...chobits?

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New fairy and...chobits?

Post by Caroibara » Thu Jan 05, 2006 10:24 am

Here comes a bunch of new pictures to give c&c.

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I'm kinda proud about this one.
I guess it's the first time I acctualy used guidelines as I should and the first time I had the time to sit down 2h to do this...

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Well.. this is a try to a persocon I guess... it still isn't finished like you can see..
The second wing and her hands are going to be finished soon.
But I have no idea what to put infront of her =/ any ideas?

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Post by Def Character » Thu Jan 05, 2006 11:08 am

It looks very promising ^^
With the first: is it just me or dous her spinal make an odd turn below the neck.

For the second I would put a lovely handbag with rushes and all
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Post by r7ll » Thu Jan 05, 2006 7:29 pm

The first one absolutely rocks! Loving the dress design over here, and I'd love to see this inked and coloured! Or even just inked, some drawings are best left black and white. Anyways your decision. I think the spine looks allright, she's got a very relaxed pose. Nothing looks too out of place to me. Keep it up!
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Post by Zephio » Thu Jan 05, 2006 9:39 pm

i like them. The face on the first one is good and something about the chin is really awesome. I like her bangs, andthe small detail you put in, like the earring. Nice job

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Post by Caroibara » Wed Jan 11, 2006 2:25 pm

Thanks for all of the comments :)

Here is an inked version of the fairy girl, I think it turned out quite good...
And when I will have the time I'll maybe try to colour it.

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What do you think?

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Post by monkey » Wed Jan 11, 2006 10:33 pm

that looks really nice =D.. what did you actually use to ink your pic, a thin felt marker? it looks very neat.. i am only good in messing up my pic :roll:

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Post by Zephio » Thu Jan 12, 2006 11:25 pm

i like it, much easier to see what's going on. A suggestion...you could sade the picture still (the pen lines make it easier to see, but the pencil shading helps add to a picture). It's a very nice line-art though.

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Post by Caroibara » Sun Jan 15, 2006 10:01 pm

Thanks to both of you :) I'll see what I can do further with this picture when I will have the time.
Monkey when I inc pictures like this one (with many details) I use my Rotring Pen. ;)
And I'm sure that you don't mess upp all your pics. Post some and show us your work! :D

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