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Post by felnix » Mon Jan 04, 2010 7:57 am

Omg! My nose getting longer O.O. Anyways thanks :)

Just finished my 3rd digital Artwork. The 2nd not going to show, because it worst than the 1st one.

3rd digital artwork:

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I don't have tablet to draw on computer, so I use mouse to draw and the face looks abit weird.
RAWR! I need to improve~

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Post by gatrosk » Mon Jan 04, 2010 8:22 am

A mouse?!?!? Dude, tablet nao.

And stop being so damn efficient, you're making us all look bad.
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Post by felnix » Mon Jan 04, 2010 8:17 pm

sry :(

But you all look so good. I like some artworks posted on this forum, and is even better than mine.
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Post by Fugva » Tue Jan 05, 2010 12:19 am

Wow, that's pretty damned good! However, I like the second to last one better than the portrait. Keep goin' man.

With a mouse? That's impressive. But you really should get your hands on a tablet (even though they're expensive).

I'll post something soon! Can't guarantee they're better though! :wink:

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Post by Caffeine » Tue Jan 05, 2010 1:01 am

I's say doing it traditional an scanning it in for a while is fine too.
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Post by felnix » Tue Jan 05, 2010 12:06 pm

Fugva : Im saving money for tablet, because I don't aim for the cheap tablet. Would like to see your arts too :P

Caffeine : By the same time, I also saving money for scanner. I am a college student who lazy to get a part-time job, haha.
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Post by felnix » Tue Jan 05, 2010 12:11 pm

Drew it yesterday. Since I found the way how to draw it digitally on the last one, I improved abit.

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Post by R0B3R7 » Tue Jan 05, 2010 3:55 pm

well, there are some very beginner-esque things about your drawings. i remember doing the same thing way back when i just started digital art.

remember that just because there are shadows doesn't mean they go from light to dark and all the colors in between show up somewhere. that's where you have to use some artistic judgement. you use very few hard lines on the edges of your shading.

also, anatomyyyy. here:
For heads and hands
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Post by felnix » Wed Jan 06, 2010 12:31 am

Thanks. I hope I can do it better next time from what you have said. About anatomy link, I can't actually view it, is it error link?

Just want to share:

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My anatomy still suck!
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Post by R0B3R7 » Wed Jan 06, 2010 12:46 am

no, it's just a 11 MB file. it's 141 pages so it might take a minute or two if your computer is sub-par
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Post by major banana » Wed Jan 06, 2010 2:19 pm

Your art looks good and refined but it also looks kinda boring, vague, looks copied and its not really 'correct' (if there is such a thing). But yea if you leave anatomical errors in your drawing, make it so that nobody notices them.

The 'school life' one you posted, it almost made me gag. Cute guy, cool guy with the untidy shirt and bag on his shoulder (do jap schoolkids really do that Ceta?), cute girl 'floating' in front,..

I see a crazy amount of rahxephon, ergo proxy, naruto etc etc in all of your drawings, modern anime style. Maybe you need to focus on finding your own thing.

I'd say something more constructive but i'm at work (pretending i'm working).

And show your 'worst' drawings too! You can learn from em.

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Post by felnix » Wed Jan 06, 2010 4:04 pm

Rob: Hmmm... I still can't view it. May be I missed some plugin on my browser.

Banana: Well, thanks. I have learnt something from what you said. My own thing? Do you mean my own style of drawing? Actually im not copying someone style, may be I accidently drew their style. I don't really know what my style is, you can see not every artworks I posted have similar style. About the school life, I did noticed the girl is weird, but don't know wheres the problem come from, may be floating?

Thanks for the critique! I want more! HAPPY :)

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Post by felnix » Wed Jan 06, 2010 4:44 pm

I spent 1hour 30mins on this..... >.<" a very long time

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Post by Fugva » Wed Jan 06, 2010 6:15 pm

Awesome robot! heh

About the girl. First thing I noticed was her arms. A bit wiggly, aren't they? I recommend you sketch the bonestructure before putting on some flesh. Also, I think her hips and boobs are a bit uneven? Or maybe that's just me, huh?

Otherwise great!

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Post by gatrosk » Wed Jan 06, 2010 7:41 pm

I agree with Fugva, (her) right forearm seems to be drooping down slightly. Which kind of makes it look like its flimsy and dipping due to gravity or something. But the robot is totally badass, nice job.
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