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Felnix's Art~ RAWR!

Post by felnix » Sat Jan 02, 2010 10:40 pm

Hi all! Im new here. First I would like to say 'My english suck'~
Feel sad that I don't have scanner and tablet to draw on computer. So I use handphone cam. Heres my artworks. Critiques are welcome :)

*I WANT TO IMPROVE* RAWR!

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Does she look like standing on beach?

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A girl :P

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School life~

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A story that I want to draw as a manga~

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My own comment, head and body isn't balance.

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Another artwork that I would like to draw in my manga.

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5 minutes art~

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Trying to create light from his hand.


*Learning how to color using photoshop* Im improving myself :)
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Post by R0B3R7 » Sun Jan 03, 2010 2:38 am

Hi, welcome to the forum.
nice drawings. one thing i reccommend is to draw on paper without lines. get a sketchbook to see your progress and save it, or even just printer paper
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Post by Zadenwings » Sun Jan 03, 2010 4:23 am

Very Nice

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Post by gatrosk » Sun Jan 03, 2010 6:04 am

Dude, nice style and good stuff.

However, your art would look better sans horizontal blue notebook lines.
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Post by dynastysat » Sun Jan 03, 2010 12:21 pm

*RAWR!* <---- Sound

nice art man
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Post by felnix » Sun Jan 03, 2010 4:23 pm

Thanks for comments.

Well, actually I always draw during class or lecture in college. I never pay attention to lecturer. I feel extreamly boring and starting to draw something on notebook. Next time I will draw on my sketchbook.

So, any improvement can I do? or correction on my art?


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Post by Zadenwings » Sun Jan 03, 2010 6:07 pm

I know what ya mean about the boring things when it comes to being at college, and sitting through the lecturer. As for you art I think its rather nice... There are a few things that are off, but besides that you are very good. The one I think is kind of off is fifth one down. The head is positioned in a wired way, and the hands are a little off, the rest I think are fine.

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Post by Fugva » Sun Jan 03, 2010 7:32 pm

Cool stuff! I especially like the 3rd and 6th. :D
I'd like to see more!

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Post by Zephio » Sun Jan 03, 2010 8:06 pm

Stylistically, I am a fan of your delicate pencil work.

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Post by Wandering_Musician » Sun Jan 03, 2010 9:14 pm

looks good :)

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Post by R0B3R7 » Sun Jan 03, 2010 10:21 pm

as far as improvement goes, i would do some anatomy studies. you'll get better at proportions and depth and stuff from doing realistic drawings and drawings from life.
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Post by felnix » Sun Jan 03, 2010 11:07 pm

Thanks to everyone who like my artwork. :)

Zaden: Hmm, that's the most error artworks I drew. Will try to correct next time when drawing the same pose.

ROB3R7: Yea, i need anatomy studies, I usually have problem on drawing hands and foot.
RAWR! I need to improve~

http://felnix.deviantart.com/

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Post by felnix » Sun Jan 03, 2010 11:18 pm

Currently learning how to produce a digital artwork with photoshop. Is too hard for me :(

This is my 1st digital art

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I saw some digital art on youtube, it look nearly impossible for me.
RAWR! I need to improve~

http://felnix.deviantart.com/

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Post by kolosos007 » Mon Jan 04, 2010 2:45 am

Wow dude...Thats...Thats AMAZING!!!!Uber awesome for a first try!

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Post by gatrosk » Mon Jan 04, 2010 5:55 am

Props man, thats awesome for your first try. I have my first try saved on my computer. And no one shall ever see it, it stands as a reminder of my improvement hahaah. This however is awesome, great stuff.
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