Something amiss in Leon's Artwork((Page 4))

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Something amiss in Leon's Artwork((Page 4))

Post by leonprimrose » Wed Jul 29, 2009 4:57 am

Been a while. I can't believe how good it felt to be playing with photoshop again after those 2 months. Well some of what I've been up to.

First one's a bit older. It was a redrawing of another one I did. I'm not sure if that one went up here though. ah well:

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[edit] p.s. sorry I didn't actually realize my old thread got bumped up before I made this one XD I was certain it had gone the way of the Dodo. -whimpers a little- Don't hurt me (T_T)

[[EDIT #2]] I figured I'd link the old thread of mine here just for the sake of comparing from earlier on when I came to now if I decide to or anyone else does. OLD ART THREAD
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Post by leonprimrose » Fri Jul 31, 2009 1:09 am

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critiques welcome. I'd like very much to get better for when/if the commission comes about and I begin work on that and also I'd like to fix myself up for the webcomic I'm working on getting together as well. I have a couple pages sketched out but I still need to scan them and finish them. Thanks in advance :)

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Post by leonprimrose » Tue Aug 04, 2009 11:00 pm

Just felt like putting this here. not particularly new but ah well
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a random ninja

Post by a random ninja » Tue Aug 04, 2009 11:12 pm

i like the very cat-like expression =]

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Post by leonprimrose » Fri Aug 07, 2009 1:46 am

thanks arn :)

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Post by Wandering_Musician » Fri Aug 07, 2009 1:51 am

he looks like a fox to me.
nice, I really like it!

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Post by leonprimrose » Wed Aug 19, 2009 5:24 am

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my god I went onto gaia recently lol I was bored and I've been thinking that I've been improving this past month so I decided to take and try out an avi art of my own avatar. yeah I know lame. lol oh well

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That's the banner I'm using for my webcomic that I finally got myself together and working on.

If you'd like to check that out I would love to hear your thoughts, and if you're a member of the site and like it favorite it or comment it or something. that's all up to you though.

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Post by gatrosk » Thu Aug 20, 2009 12:31 am

I really like it, except for one thing...

You might want to study facial anatomy a little bit, because it seems like a reoccuring thing that your facial features on your characters is distorted and wrong.

But once you practice a bit and get it down, you're pictures will looks worlds better. ^_^
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Post by leonprimrose » Thu Aug 20, 2009 1:01 am

hmm how do you mean exactly Gat? I'll definitely look into it of course. but can you be just a little bit more specific? or is it too general a thing?

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Post by Wandering_Musician » Thu Aug 20, 2009 2:01 am

hey thats awesome you began your own comic!
I think its great that you are coloring it as well.

yeah the profile view of blondie in the second page does look a little off.

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Post by Caffeine » Thu Aug 20, 2009 1:46 pm

I'd say it's more of a neck thing.
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Post by gatrosk » Thu Aug 20, 2009 5:08 pm

leonprimrose wrote:hmm how do you mean exactly Gat? I'll definitely look into it of course. but can you be just a little bit more specific? or is it too general a thing?
The facial features seem shifted too far to the right for the current shape of the jawline and the cheek, brow, etc.

The face outline looks accurate basically but the features should be centered more imo.
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Post by leonprimrose » Thu Aug 20, 2009 11:14 pm

huh. looks right to me (On the image I put on here I mean) o.0 I'll look into it some more

for the comic panel lol yeah I notice that too XP don't know why I didn't when I did it.

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Post by leonprimrose » Mon Sep 07, 2009 8:20 pm

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The pic I posted on the [Strathmore] Thread. critique here, mild ideas or thoughts there

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Post by R0B3R7 » Mon Sep 07, 2009 9:55 pm

i like the mechanical wings idea, but then she's not really a fairy or what? i mean...they would have to be put in or whatever.
as for critique, her leg looks like it's made of rubber :D and she has suppperrrr small hip/butt area.
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