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Yaz

My Mini Manga

Post by Yaz » Thu Sep 11, 2008 1:40 pm

Hey I just joined this forum, I actually haven't been apart of the site that long but this looks like a spot to share things so this is where I'm gonna do it! haha

So if you're interested check out my Mini Manga and just tell me what you think. And if you like it continue to read it! I'm trying to post the next chapter tonight! I call it a mini manga because it's the manga I draw to keep me busy while I work on my actual manga.

This is a pretty light hearted story that gets dark later on. I'm doing it this way because I want the story to start off somehwat shallow and slowly evolve into its real deep intense storyline. It's something that actually allows me to explore my style of drawing without worrying about the restrictions my perfectionist mind tries to put on me.

Check it out here!
www.webstarts.com/firepathdeity

Appreciate it!!!!

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Post by Aether » Thu Sep 11, 2008 2:07 pm

This is good. I actually want to read more of it.
Although, what's troubling me is the generic massive hands thing... but meh.

Keep it up. And seriously, if this is only your mini manga, I'd love to see your actual one.

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Post by Dominion » Thu Sep 11, 2008 2:18 pm

I'd read it...only you site is far to bright and shiny for me to inconspicuously peek at while in work.

Sorry!
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a random ninja

Post by a random ninja » Thu Sep 11, 2008 4:07 pm

loved it! looking forward to seeing more of it!

Yaz

Post by Yaz » Thu Sep 11, 2008 4:33 pm

haha bright and shiny. Appreciate you guys looking, hopefully i'll post the first part of the third book tonight.

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Post by a random ninja » Thu Sep 11, 2008 4:54 pm

that'd be super =]

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Post by pencil » Thu Sep 11, 2008 5:02 pm

nice i want to read it ^_^ :D

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Post by nabicat » Thu Sep 11, 2008 6:28 pm

Very nice action and layout! :D

Yui

Post by Yui » Fri Sep 12, 2008 4:07 am

Awesome your ideology is similar to mine so naturally I like where this story is going =D

Yaz

Post by Yaz » Fri Sep 12, 2008 3:23 pm

So I got a chance to post some pages to Book 3 last night. I came up one page short from where I wanted. Making this freakin' Commercial for homework has me up in the a.m. @__@. So last night I was doped up on coffee keeping me awake, but the coffee was being counter-acted by the Banana pudding which made me sleepy. So long hours into the night I posted 6 pages and then did a fine job of worming my way to bed...seeing as my legs took the initiative and fell asleep before me T__T. Hope you guys like it.

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Post by Dominion » Fri Sep 12, 2008 3:27 pm

But pudding is the source to all power :shock:

How could it make you sleepy?

I'll check this out by the way at home...I forgot last night, you were second place to WoW I'm afraid. Sorry >.>''
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Post by a random ninja » Fri Sep 12, 2008 4:19 pm

lol

'plaaaaay!'

keep it coming =]

...and how does banana pudding make you sleepy?

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Post by Caffeine » Sat Sep 13, 2008 4:19 am

If it's warm, anything makes me sleepy, even coffee.
Also fullness can make one sleepy too.
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Post by a random ninja » Sat Sep 13, 2008 5:14 am

the itis! =]

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Post by Excalibur » Sat Sep 13, 2008 12:58 pm

Well, I read a couple pages then didn't feel like reading it more then. But, one thing I noticed is, your arms are so twig like, and legs, the legs would never hold him up.
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