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Posted: Sat Jun 28, 2008 6:15 am
by Aether
Nice job. I really like how you did the hair. You guys are doing 2 pages right?

If so, I can't wait to see the next.

Although, I can't help but point out that his elbows just seem too close together when he's holding the binoculars or whatever they are. But other than that it's made of pure awesome.

Posted: Sat Jun 28, 2008 6:27 am
by The Raging Spaniard
Who is "you guys"?

I'll be doing more than two pages.

Oh and thanks for the crit, you're mistaken in thinking it looks wrong, but thanks anyways.

Posted: Sat Jun 28, 2008 6:37 am
by Aether
Ha ha. You guys = everyone who are actually doing the collaboration. Not you guys as in everyone who helped you make this page, because I know it was only you who made it.

And I can't wait to see them. I feel like I'm getting a bonus. More than two pages.

And it's just what I thought. I don't know but yeah, it just looked a bit off to me.

Oh and by the way. I like your new avatar, really cool. ;D

Posted: Sat Jun 28, 2008 6:39 am
by The Raging Spaniard
Not much of a Collab Manga if the whole thing is only two pages, don't you think?

I'll probably do something around 4 pages, this one only took about 3 hours from sketch to colors after all, so its not like they take very long

Posted: Sat Jun 28, 2008 6:54 am
by Aether
Ha ha. Dude, I meant everyone who's doing the collaboration are doing like minimum of 2 pages. And then we put it all together. But yeah, I can see how that would get confusing. o_O

And man you're fast. I've been practicing for ages and I still can't turn out anything good yet. But you know... practice makes perfect I guess.

Posted: Sat Jun 28, 2008 7:17 pm
by gatrosk
Wow RTS I love it... simply amazing! Can't wait for more! ^_^

Btw... i'm just wondering when you do this type of thing how many pixels per inch (or cm) do you set it at. Just curious, because I'm trying to find a happy medium for myself without having my computer lag too much because of all the pixels.. soo yeah. ^^

Posted: Wed Jul 02, 2008 7:49 pm
by Az
why the dickens do you guys have basically the same avatar? it's really confusing and somewhat homo

anyway, enough jokes, I like your entry trs - one thing I'm wondering, however, is how come the sky refraction on him is blueish while the sky is orange? Or is it the glow from his spaceship and/ or car dashboard
hey I guess it could also be some stylistic shit I dunno

Posted: Thu Jul 03, 2008 2:19 am
by Aether
Hey, I was the first FullMetal Freak... gatrosk copied me. >_>

I think it might be from his little car.

Posted: Thu Jul 03, 2008 2:56 am
by Jamz
It's also on the tower in the background so it can't be from the car.

Posted: Thu Jul 03, 2008 9:45 pm
by Raptoe
Az wrote:why the dickens do you guys have basically the same avatar? it's really confusing and somewhat homo

anyway, enough jokes, I like your entry trs - one thing I'm wondering, however, is how come the sky refraction on him is blueish while the sky is orange? Or is it the glow from his spaceship and/ or car dashboard
hey I guess it could also be some stylistic shit I dunno
It's voodoo magic *nods*
:wink:

Looking very good so far

Posted: Wed Oct 15, 2008 8:37 pm
by acidmm
hows the next page coming along ?