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- Fri Feb 03, 2017 4:13 am
- Forum: Writing
- Topic: Feedback on my Story Concept?
- Replies: 2
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Hi pearlybones. I was skeptical at first about your story, because it seemed like a thinly-veiled version of real life. But as I read, I started to become excited about your idea. You really fleshed out a good story. I would love to critique the first page of your script if you have it.