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by Jojo_the_mangaka
Thu May 02, 2013 3:30 am
Forum: Art Talk
Topic: It has been awhile but I'm back!
Replies: 0
Views: 5286

It has been awhile but I'm back!

I have not disappeared from this earth! I've still been drawing! The reason I haven't posted in awhile was because my style was going through a change, and over all I was not satisfied with what I was producing. I can now say I'm at a point where I'm content, granted I still have a lot to learn and ...
by Jojo_the_mangaka
Sat Jul 28, 2012 2:00 am
Forum: Art Talk
Topic: Jojo's finished art, critiques welcome :)
Replies: 14
Views: 5040

Re: Jojo's finished art, critiques welcome :)

While the style is nice, I'm not a big fan of this new pic. I think the reason is because of the mouth; it's drawn a little bit too long and in a way kind of looks like someone (or something) is pulling her cheek. Her nose should also be further to the right since the center of her eyes is not wher...
by Jojo_the_mangaka
Fri Jul 20, 2012 8:12 pm
Forum: Art Talk
Topic: Jojo's finished art, critiques welcome :)
Replies: 14
Views: 5040

Re: Jojo's finished art, critiques welcome :)

Here's another one of my Oc's

http://lovelyinblack.deviantart.com/#/d57vsgp

And here is her speed draw :) hope you enjoy :)

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=x6Z8P5l6 ... ture=g-upl

My main male character is next :)
by Jojo_the_mangaka
Mon Jul 09, 2012 9:10 pm
Forum: Art Talk
Topic: Jojo's finished art, critiques welcome :)
Replies: 14
Views: 5040

Re: Jojo's finished art, critiques welcome :)

lol yeah I have a tendency to repeat myself idk why though and I'll definitely post more pics shortly :)
by Jojo_the_mangaka
Mon Jul 09, 2012 2:39 am
Forum: Art Talk
Topic: Original Manga : Disaster
Replies: 13
Views: 5322

Re: Original Manga : Disaster

Don't worry you'll get there it just takes practice and dedication :)
by Jojo_the_mangaka
Mon Jul 09, 2012 2:36 am
Forum: Art Talk
Topic: Jojo's finished art, critiques welcome :)
Replies: 14
Views: 5040

Re: Jojo's finished art, critiques welcome :)

I've been experimenting with many different starting points, a little bit of her past will be revealed near the beginning so no one gets confused. Most likely it will start at the last military base. I have not started paneling yet, I'm still writing. I just want to make sure I have everything ,or ...
by Jojo_the_mangaka
Sun Jul 08, 2012 3:21 pm
Forum: Art Talk
Topic: Jojo's finished art, critiques welcome :)
Replies: 14
Views: 5040

Re: Jojo's finished art, critiques welcome :)

I've been experimenting with many different starting points, a little bit of her past will be revealed near the beginning so no one gets confused. Most likely it will start at the last military base. I have not started paneling yet, I'm still writing. I just want to make sure I have everything ,or a...
by Jojo_the_mangaka
Sun Jul 08, 2012 3:57 am
Forum: Art Talk
Topic: Jojo's finished art, critiques welcome :)
Replies: 14
Views: 5040

Re: Jojo's finished art, critiques welcome :)

Thank you! :D I've been drawing for as long as I can remember but I've been working on my OC and her story nearly 6 years. The world she is from is completely made up. I'll definitely explain her story more thoroughly as I post more pics, but I'll see if I can explain her back story without revealin...
by Jojo_the_mangaka
Sun Jul 08, 2012 2:42 am
Forum: Art Talk
Topic: Original Manga : Disaster
Replies: 13
Views: 5322

Re: Original Manga : Disaster

I like the use of tone on the first pic :) I do think you need to work on anatomy just a little, but overall, it looks nice :)
by Jojo_the_mangaka
Sat Jul 07, 2012 12:24 am
Forum: Art Talk
Topic: Jojo's finished art, critiques welcome :)
Replies: 14
Views: 5040

Re: Jojo's finished art, critiques welcome :)

Hopefully, but I'll just have to see what I can do. I'm in the sketching phase for the next one so I'll just have to see. If I can't get a new tripod by then, maybe I can try flipping my video clips :P
by Jojo_the_mangaka
Thu Jul 05, 2012 9:39 pm
Forum: Art Talk
Topic: Jojo's finished art, critiques welcome :)
Replies: 14
Views: 5040

Jojo's finished art, critiques welcome :)

Hi there! It's been forever since I've posted here! Anyway, I figured I'd post my new pics here. So, here you go! :)

http://lovelyinblack.deviantart.com/#/d55ymiz

And if you're interested, here is the speed draw.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=M5UQg4qlqFg
by Jojo_the_mangaka
Sun May 29, 2011 9:42 pm
Forum: Art Talk
Topic: tsuki's manga = critique please!
Replies: 4
Views: 1986

I think you have a very cute drawing style. :) However, there are some anatomy issues that you need to work on. The bodies and hands are too small compared to the head. I would also work on perspective especially when drawing your characters. Lastly, your inking is a little shaky and uneven in some ...
by Jojo_the_mangaka
Tue May 24, 2011 2:43 am
Forum: Art Talk
Topic: Jojo's art... needs Criticism :)
Replies: 5
Views: 2033

Wow thanks I didn't notice that until you pointed that out! :shock:
Heres another sketch, he did not turn out very well. :oops: He's unfinished I still have to sketch his body. Btw does anyone have advice on drawing scars?

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by Jojo_the_mangaka
Sun May 22, 2011 2:11 am
Forum: Art Talk
Topic: Jojo's art... needs Criticism :)
Replies: 5
Views: 2033

Sorry for the double post :?

Image

This is the same character.
Her eyes, hair, and hand did not turn out well :(
Any advice?
by Jojo_the_mangaka
Sun May 22, 2011 12:24 am
Forum: Art Talk
Topic: Tshua's portfolio
Replies: 16
Views: 6764

I love your style!! Very nice! 8)